Here is my first post of new poems: I invite your comments

I plan to post a variety of entries that will include poems and essays on various topics. I will start with a few poems from a rather extensive file. I had intended to try and publish another book of poems but decided instead to fulfill a wish on my “bucket list” and write a novel. Perhaps I will post an occasional chapter once I get the hang of this new mode of behavior.

I have chosen three poems on subjects which readers might enjoy. They are also short. Jane told me short is good to start with. Since my garden is doing a spectacular job of growing and because there may be gardeners among you I wrote a sonnet about gardening. I love to write sonnets because they represent a genuine intellectual challenge which probably delays the onset of memory loss and something else that escapes me at the moment. They are challenging because the meaning must be communicated in the space of 14 lines each of which contains  the same number of stressed syllables and one must follow a rhyme scheme of abab, cdcd, efef, gg. At least that’s the case with this type of classic sonnet. Don’t request a picture of my garden since that would constitute an act contrary to the meaning of the poem. The poem about old athletes is self explanatory and may tell you something about them you didn’t know. The poem about fisherwomen allows me to give vent to a pet peeve which relates to the nonsense of requiring the use of the P.C. designation “Fisherperson” in publications concerning piscatory pursuits. Enjoy!

 

Fisherwomen

Please don’t tell me
you have a canoe you row
or a boat you paddle.
Nor does it have a genuine ring
to refer to tippet
or leader
or line as your string.
Such nonsense for me only worsens
when I’m told
I go to the river
with fisherpersons.

Let’s agree women can fish
and let’s call these creatures
fisherwomen,
at least that’s my wish.

And then of course maybe then
we can have creatures
we call
fishermen.

In terms of prowess
I make no distinctions.
In terms of companionship
I have a preference,
be it ever so slender,
and only this
do I ascribe to gender.

 

Old Athletes

There are poems about

old athletes written by

mere observers who pretend

 

to portray the pathos of

pitiful old jocks trying

to recover the magic on

 

public courts in some

park and dream for them

of youthful days gone by

 

without knowing the old fools

still live in the magic space

at the very top of a jump –

 

shot where the world rolls off

the tips of their fingers

spinning toward the hoop

 

and joyously move through

the morning mist upon

the phantom limbs of youth

 

with no regrets.


 

Garden Sonnet

They cannot believe it’s a simple thing

to grow a grand garden free of weeds.

‘Tis too hard for them this rite of Spring,

hand-tilling the soil, planting the seeds.

 

But for me there is balance to restore

in the deeper caring for the fate of plants

as gardening assumes the shape of metaphor

for embracing mindfulness over chance.

 

There is for each rich fork of soil turned

a reward of soul well worth the cost.

For every moment of peace thus earned

there is a worldly care that is lost.

 

It is not a simple thing this toil

unless you plant your self in the soil.